Journal+8

Five common errors I make are:

-I word things weird in sentences... in an order that I can change to make the sentence sound better -I need to find another word for adolescent, teen, and kids/children, because I repeat the word a lot -I start some of my sentences off strange, and it seems like it's said wrong -Some of my sentences are short and choppy, and others are long and use 'and' and 'or' a lot -I need to expand on some of paragraphs with less information, because I don't talk anything else other than the information